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Chapter 1 of my untitled novel...(the first post was prologue)

Nov. 27th, 2006 | 04:43 am
mood: weird weird
music: Gorillaz-Kids With Guns

Chapter 1

The sweet, fresh scent of newly cut pine consumed the young man’s senses. He drew in a deep breath, letting the aroma cool the anger boiling in his veins. He picked up his axe once more and let loose another hard blow into base of the pine tree.

How dare he! He thought, furiously flicking his dark, sweat soaked fringe from his eyes, leaving a grubby trail of dirt across his forehead. The dirty forehead only helped add to the youth’s generally disheveled appearance. His clothes were old, dirty and very much in need of repair, his boots were worn but still sturdy and his mass of dark hair flopped untidily about his face. But appearance was hardly something the young man cared about much less at a time like this.

He lifted his axe ready to strike the tree once more when a slight disturbance in the undergrowth nearby caught his attention. He spun about warily, a challenging look in his eye, the axe held defensively by his shoulder.

“Who’s there?” he demanded.

There was an amused snort from the undergrowth as a handsome youth emerged from the bushes. Unlike the dark haired woodcutter this young man was fair haired, however this was one of the few physical differences between them. The facial resemblance between the two was undeniable. They both shared the same fine bone structure with the same strong set jaw, pointed nose, high cheekbones but perhaps the most admired feature they shared was the same set of sharp blue eyes. While the dark haired boy was more rugged and unkempt in appearance the fair haired boy clearly took a good deal more care in how he looked, his hair neatly trimmed and his clothing and skin recently washed and groomed.

“Keep your skin on Lavaché. It’s only me!” Said the fair haired boy.

The boys’ eyes met. Lavaché looked less than pleased to see the fair haired youth.

“A warning might be nice next time if you don’t want me to hack your pretty head off.” Snapped Lavaché irritably.

“I did give you a warning!” declared the other with a sly grin. “I stepped on a twig for you!”

Lavaché rolled his eyes in annoyance, lifting his axe ready to strike the tree once more. The fair haired boy sat down on a nearby trunk, his look of amusement dissolving into a slightly guarded look of concern.

“What do you want Elidore?” demanded Lavaché as he dealt the tree another hard blow. “You here to tell me I’m wrong and that I should apologise? A little unlike you.”

“Well I would think this is a little unlike you too!” retorted Elidore. “Firing off at father the way you did and then storming off into the woods like a spoilt child. That’s something I’d do, not something level headed, sensible Lavaché would do.”

“I hardly think you should be lecturing me on the way I acted to father,” Lavaché said giving Elidore a deathly glare.

He gave one last, anger driven hack into the pine tree. It creaked loudly as it toppled over to one side and fell to the forest floor with a loud crash making a nearby flock of birds disappear in fright with a rush of beating wings. Lavaché sat down on his newly created stump and dropped the axe by his feet. Now that the tree was felled and all his bitterness had faded rational thought returned. A new wave of guilt overcame him.

“I stuffed up, didn’t I?” He muttered.

“Yes, brother, you did!” said Elidore bluntly.

Lavaché smiled grimly.

“Well put it this way Vach,” Elidore said. “We’ve all got to make a mistake eventually. Me, I make them hourly. I suppose it was about time for you to make yours.”

“I make mistakes.” Said Lavaché bitterly.

“Sure you do,” said Elidore sarcastically.

The two of them fell into silence. Elidore’s eyes fell to the axe at his brother’s feet.

“Why do you always cut pine trees? You know they don’t burn well.” He complained.

“I like the smell,” confessed Lavaché.

Elidore grinned, raising an eyebrow mockingly.

“You like the smell?” he repeated cynically.

Lavaché glanced up his brother, giving him a mysterious smile as he drew something from his pocket. He held it gently in his hand for a moment, smiling fondly at it before tossing it to Elidore. Elidore stared at it for a moment, even more confused than before. It was a little wooden carving of an otter. He gave Lavaché a quizzical look.

“Pine is good for making these too. It’s easy to find in these woods and easy to carve.” He said quietly, a mild tone of self consciousness in his voice.

Elidore shook his head with a smile tossing the little object back to Lavaché.

“You certainly are an individual.” He said standing. “So are you going to apologise to dad?”

Lavaché met his brothers eyes and seeing the irony in them gave a small laugh. He sighed.

“I guess I’ll have to won’t I?” he replied with only the slightest hint of bitterness.

“Well, on other news, I participated in the hunt today!” Elidore said enthusiastically.

“By participate, you mean watch don’t you?”

Elidore gave Lavaché a mock offended smile and shoved him playfully.

“Actually I was the one who found the bore today.”

Lavaché raised his brows, clearly impressed.

“Well done!” He exclaimed. “You didn’t catch it though did you?”

Elidore gave him a patronizing glare, then dropped his head slightly.

“No,” he said disappointedly.

Lavaché clapped his shoulder encouragingly.

“You will one day brother,” he said as they disappeared into the shadow of the undergrowth.

***

The boys emerged from the forest into a cluttered clearing deep in the forests core. Unhorsed caravans and carts lined the area. A group of horses were tied up to one side of the caravans. Hastily erected canvas tents of varying sizes and states of wear filled the majority of the clearing. The charred remains of a campfire lay in the middle of the clearing, surrounded by a circle of logs and handmade stools. A large group of men occupied this area although some of the men were tending to the caravans, horses and tents. One man was even preparing a large amount of food by a makeshift cook pot.

Lavaché glanced about, nervously, scanning the crowd of men for his father. He frowned, catching no sight of him strode off, his eyes fixed determinedly on a nearby caravan. He threw open the door to the caravan. Standing inside, scrawling hastily on some manuscripts was his father, a tall, brooding fellow with a characteristic scar that ran down the length of one side of his face. The man looked up from his manuscripts. His expression fell at the sight of his son. Lavaché shifted awkwardly.

“Lavaché,” said the man stiffly.

“Father,” replied Lavaché, equally stiffly.

They stared at each other for a moment. Then Lavaché dropped his gaze uncomfortably.

“I…I…”began Lavaché but was sharply interrupted by the entrance of a third man into the caravan.

The man who entered was dressed in travel garb, a hood cloaked his face. Lavaché knew however the hood was for more than just travel purposes, this man never went out in public without the hood concealing his appearance.

One side of his face was severely disfigured, which rumour had it he’d received as a youth when trying to rescue a girl from trapped in a burning house. Nobody knew the exact details of how or what happened but it was said that he had nearly died in the attempt and the burns he’d received had his entire left side of his body was deformed.

The hooded man was puffing hard with exertion, he looked near to collapse. He clutched some crumpled manuscript in his right hand. Lavaché’s father leapt forward to steady the man.

“Dorsard,” greeted the hooded man between puffs.

Dorsard turned to Lavaché, a slight look of regret in his eyes.

“Sorry Lavaché but this is urgent,” he said to his son.

Lavaché frowned slightly, curiosity eating away at his gut. He nodded reluctantly and slipped out of the cabin. He caught Elidore’s eye and signaled him over to him. Within seconds his brother was at his side.

“Well?" Elidore asked.

“Verdorn’s here,” whispered Lavaché.

Elidore’s eyes widened with surprise and intrigue, making no protest as his brother took hold of his arm and lead him around to the other side of their father’s caravan and indicated for him to be absolutely silent. Elidore nodded, a look of mischievous excitement flushing across his handsome face.

The boys listened carefully. They could vaguely make out the sounds of hushed whispers inside but disappointingly they couldn’t discern what it was that was being said. Then suddenly the conversation stopped, there was a scrape of a boot as one of the men in the caravan began hurriedly moving about the vehicle and by what they could tell was gathering things up. Lavaché and Elidore shared a concerned glance.

“Where do you think he’s going this time?” whispered Elidore.

Lavaché gave his brother a silencing glare. Elidore raised his eyebrows with attitude and pressed his ear to the caravan once more.

“You can’t just leave, Dorsard! They suspect that you’re involved!” cried Verdorn in an animated whisper. “At least wait until Sunday when Etolias gets back and we can send him instead! They don’t suspect him!”

“Three days is too long!” Dorsard cried. “If I don’t leave now I may be too late!”

“Keep your voice down!” snapped Verdorn. “If you must go today, let me go with you!”

“No,” he said calmly. “I need you to…”

His voice softened suddenly and the boys were unable to make out what their father was saying. Elidore nearly growled in frustration. They heard the scrape of a boot near the door indicating they should move lest be seen eavesdropping. The scurried away to the campfire barely moments before Dorsard emerged from the caravan, a travel pack and cloak in hand. The boys exchanged worried glances.

“Quick, let’s go!” hissed Elidore and the two of them briskly followed their father’s footsteps. But they were stopped by a firm hand from Verdorn.

“Stop,” he hissed. “Do not follow him!”

Elidore gave him a loathing glare.

“Where’s he going?” he demanded.

“He’s going away for a few days. He’ll be back at the end of the week.”

“Why?”

“What your father does is his own business. It does not involve you.”

“It does if he gets killed!” cried Elidore.

Lavaché placed a warning hand on Elidore’s arm. Verdorn’s eyes burned with fury, equally returned by Elidore.

“Enough, Elidore,” Lavaché said deliberatly. “Verdorn said he’ll be back at the end of the week!”

He articulated the last sentence very deliberately. Elidore caught his meaning instantly and dropped his gaze to the ground. He strode away from both of them defiantly. Verdorn was about to walk away in the opposite direction when Lavaché stayed him with one hand.

“If father is doing something dangerous you would tell us wouldn’t you?” Lavaché asked tentatively.

Verdorn frowned at the youth.

“Of course.” He said and turned away.

Lavaché knew he was lying, he watched him closely as he disappeared into a nearby tent. Lavaché sighed and looked around for Elidore. He spotted him sitting on a stool by the fire, a furious expression on his face. He glared at Lavaché angrily. He was well aware more than one set of eyes were watching them.

“Why did you listen to him? We could have followed dad!”

“Elidore, listen to me!” Lavaché whispered, hushedly, his eyes shifting to the men nearby who’s gazes were a little too keen. “Wherever father is going, whatever he is doing he hasn’t filled us in on it for a reason. We may end up ruining whatever it is he’s doing by following him, we may even put him in more danger!”

Elidore’s bitterness seemed to subside at his brothers words.

“Father isn’t a fool brother,” he continued. “He knows how to take care of himself. He’ll be fine.”

Elidore sighed. “Promise me if he’s not back by the end of the week we’ll do something.”

“Agreed,” Lavaché said with a grim smile.

Lavaché stared off in the direction his father had gone, a sinking feeling of doubt in his gut. If he hadn’t been so consumed by his burning feeling of guilt and concern for his father he might have noticed that two of the men nearby, one old and one young shared a glance only to disappear half an hour later, heading toward the same path Dorsard had taken, travel packs in hand.

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My graphics

Nov. 27th, 2006 | 01:59 am

If you haven't checked it out yet, have a look at my graphics! Not sure how you look at them if you aren't me...I go to pictures and then view pictures...hopefully that will work! Then once you are in there make sure you click on the pics because they aren't full size!

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First entry for my currently untitled novel...

Nov. 26th, 2006 | 01:57 pm
location: Sin City....aka Brisvegas...well not really, just Newmarket!
mood: artistic
music: Portishead- Numb

Warning to dad and mum this first bit is quite violent...(to Tam, it's not much of an issue...you can deal with fairly graphic violence) just thought I'd warn you in advance so you don't get too shocked when you read it! Although I guess it's not on par with Kill bill or anything so you should be right...

Prologue

The midday sun ferociously baked the dry landscape. Eerily, the broken white sandstone walls of the old city’s remains glowed almost with life in the sun’s glare. If anyone had been there to see it they might have smiled at the irony. Wild overgrown bushes, vines and bracken snaked across the decaying buildings, all glory of the past forgotten beneath cracked walls. 

It had once been a great city, the most important city; but earthquake, war and drought had left this ancient city broken and alone in the wilderness, left to the mercy of nature and the slow decay of time. But something was different today. 

All was silent as the dead of night. Even the famous seas gales of the Tromaz coast were absent. No leaf or grain of dust stirred on the parched ground. No insect buzzed, no birdcall resonated. Nothing. 

A sense of anticipation sang in the hot dry air. Everything seemed ready, paused and waiting. Something was about to happen. Nature itself could sense it.
The silence was broken with the sounds of approaching footsteps. Small puffs of dust sprang into life as the earth of the city that had been left untouched by human feet for over a century was unsettled by a set of well worn leather boots. 

The wearer of the boots; a hard looking, rugged man in his mid-forties, came to a sudden halt. He gazed about his environment with a sharp, inquisitive eye. He pulled some withered manuscripts from the pocket of his ageing coat and glanced at them briefly, looking up as if to confirm what was written. Seemingly satisfied he folded the notes back up and placed them in his pocket. The expression on his face, however, told a very different story. Far from satisfied he looked tense and wary. His ears pricked slightly as a second set of boots scraped faintly behind him, confirming his suspicions. 

The first man continued walking in feigned ignorance. Unseen by his follower the man’s troubled expression deepened into fear as his right hand shifted ever closer to the blade at his waist. 

Suddenly without warning the first man spun around with razor sharp speed and threw the dagger behind him. The follower let out a loud howl of agony as the blade sliced painfully into his shoulder. His handsome face blanched with the sudden shock of the attack. Before the follower could even have a chance to react to the wound he found himself shoved hard up against the nearest wall, the cold, angry face of the man he was following glaring at him. 

“You,” The attacker spat at the man in despised recognition, ripping the blade excruciatingly from the victim’s arm.
 
He let out another loud howl of agony, not daring to look as he felt the spouting fountain of blood pump from the wound. The attacker soon discovered his victim had not come alone as he felt the cold tip of a dagger at his throat. 

“Drop the knife Dorsard,” commanded the third man. 

Dorsard stiffened. His expression of anger fell, horror and disbelief replacing it. The familiarity of the voice hit him hard as the sinking realisation of betrayal ate at his belly. Dorsard’s knife fell to the ground with a thud, not out of compliance to the command but from the shock of his former friend’s sudden turn of loyalty. The wounded man, upon Dorsard’s release scurried away from Dorsard like a cowardly animal, desperately clutching his wound. The stranger pressed Dorsard’s face hard into the cold, dry surface of the wall he had just pinned the other man to. Dorsard struggled slightly but felt the knife press harder into the soft flesh of his throat. 

“His treachery I could understand, but yours?” Dorsard whispered, stunned and confused. 

“Hand it over now and I will make it painless.” Said the stranger coldly. 

Any remaining hope Dorsard had harboured, shattered at the frosty, indifferent tone in the man’s voice. Dorsard’s hand slipped into his pocket and pulled out the same tattered manuscripts he had looked at before and held them out behind him. The man snatched them violently out of his hands. 

“Take these,” snarled the older man at the other. 

The wounded man reached out and took the papers with his good arm and began reading them carefully. The other man spun Dorsard around to face him. Dorsard stared into the aging face of the man a smug expression on his face. A small crimson trickle seeped from below the blade as the pressure cut into Dorsard’s neck. 

“You really don’t want to be doing that,” Dorsard sneered. “Kill me and you will never find them!” 

The older man’s eyes narrowed with fury. The knife at Dorsard’s throat hesitated slightly. The wounded man frowned deeply as he looked through the manuscripts. 

“These aren’t the right manuscripts!” he cried. 

He stumbled over to his former attacker, a knife of his own in hand holding it dangerously close to his left eye. Dorsard’s smug grin broadened. The other man forced the younger man's knife away from Dorsard’s face, keeping his own firmly at his throat. 

“These are old letters and medical records!” The wounded man hissed angrily, shaking Dorsard violently. “Where in darkness are the real manuscripts?” 

Dorsard smiled eerily for a moment before thrusting all his weight into the blade at his throat. 



OK that's the end for the prologue...let me know what you think!

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My first entry ever!

Nov. 25th, 2006 | 10:28 am
location: Brisvegas!
mood: cheerful cheerful
music: Sarah McLachlan: "Time"

Welcome to my live journal where you can see some stuff of mine...I might post first few chapters of my novel...some graphics I've done...who knows...this is quite experimental as I've never used this before!

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